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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
0 posted 2003-02-10 06:02 AM

The tears your eyes find
cascading from skies above
filling such hearts blind
neverending love

casting upon moon waters


Now eclipse the pain
before feeling such a loss
refresh in the rain
unburden that cross

fasting upon moon waters


No secret so kept
as for this love spills over
heart's blood wet and wept
loving us sober

lasting upon moon waters

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02
© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-02-10 09:11 AM

Very very enchanting feel to this piece Craig.
Much enjoyed...love the title as well.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~
Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-02-10 11:28 AM

Very well written!
Duncan
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3 posted 2003-02-10 11:40 AM

'No secret so kept
as for this love spills over
heart's blood wet and wept
loving us sober

lasting upon moon waters'

Damn, that's good.
Robert Frazier
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4 posted 2003-02-10 12:09 PM

You write with wonderful symmetry.  I enjoy your poetry!
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-02-10 12:37 PM

"fasting upon moon waters"
Craig, that's my kind of fasting!
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-02-10 06:11 PM

Secret moon charm showing through.
Very lovely.
Margherita
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2003-02-10 11:06 PM

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all
Aimster
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8 posted 2003-02-10 11:24 PM

beautiful writing, stunning imagery. im impressed...take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~
garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-02-10 11:41 PM

This is a beautiful poem....
I enjoyed reading it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  
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