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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-03 07:29 AM

Quatrain
When minor is serious,
And serious becomes critical,
There is nothing humorous
And all is emotional.

Cinquain
Minor
Now serious
Everything’s critical
Emotional without humor
Fearful

Sijo
What was minor turns to serious, humor turns humorless
Eyes once glisten now is haze, listen only through the days,
Offspring caring for the parent, sitting emotionally spent.

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-03 07:53 AM

an interesting write... and I see no humor survived any of the three form of levels... indicative?

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2003-02-03 08:25 AM

Thank you, Cpat Hair,
Pleased you enjoyed,
No humor survived the weekend to make in the words,
But with me, it seldom does.

Gloom

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-02-03 08:48 AM

Thanks, PG... You know I love seeing poetic formats grace the boards... We've gotta work on making you smile at least a little bit, my friend...

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-02-03 10:09 AM

Professor,

Well, I wish for you some peace of mind, if not humor....

Must say this makes me smile to be able to read the talent of you....
constantly learning just reading your poetry...

thank you for sharing it with us.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-02-03 10:15 AM

Professor,
Well you don't have to rub it in.
Excellent work, how about a day off for a smile or two.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-02-03 10:16 AM

Professor...my prayers are with you...

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2003-02-03 10:36 AM

Thank you, Nan,
I find working with forms good for the spirit,
I am attempting to compile a list with explanation for my site.
I am pleased you could enjoy this work

Thank you, regards2you,
I am glad you are able to pull a bit from my writing
I appreciate the kind words.

Thank you, Seymour,
Not trying to rub it in,
But my mood tend to rub off,
I do attempt to moderate it for this forum
And keep the death and destruction to a minimum.
Glad you liked.

Thank you, Sunshine.

Gloom

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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8 posted 2003-02-10 02:25 PM

What an excellent exercise! Doing this kind of thing would make anyone a better poet.

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