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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-09 07:15 AM

The art of Josephine Wall

Sometimes it may seem
It's better not to touch your dream
It might not be
What you should see
Or meant to face reality
But there is a place
Where every dream can come alive
Down deep inside
They will survive
Inside your heart...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is the first verse to a new song I am writing at the moment.
It will be the title of my CD, called simply: "Sometimes".
There will be one other verse down the line,
but at the moment, the music is the key.
So, my friends, I present this as a preview,
and hope you enjoy!!

~~Sunny~~

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-09 08:58 AM

I did enjoy...thank you.
It's beautiful.
Eric

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-02-09 10:00 AM

I am looking forward to the full version! Interesting thoughts in this, Sunnyone. I know the music will sing true.

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

3 posted 2003-02-09 11:05 AM

Sunny
I love it - cannot wait fo the full version and a copy of the CD when completed. Thank you for sharing.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-02-09 11:11 AM

very lovely, Sunnyone

*s
M

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2003-02-09 11:25 AM

Hi Ericc...and thank you, too.  It's always nice to get feedback on a piece of work, helps you see it through other eyes besides your own!

Hi Midinitesun...well, the music is almost done.  Sometimes the words arrive first, sometimes the music, but this one is taking turns!  Glad you like the thoughts here.

Hi Ariana...am so glad you enjoyed it, and I think you'll like the music, too.  It may take awhile to get my first CD done, as I am a DIY'er (no, not 'destroy-it-yourself!!), and it's a long process. But rest assured that when it's done, I'll float one over to you across the big pond!!! Thanks, too!!!

Thank you 'M'...I really am happy to get feedback on this one, and when the midi is done, will repost it with a link, so that everyone can hear the music.  Cross your fingers, k?  LOL!!!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

bbent
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

6 posted 2003-02-10 01:35 AM

They do indeed survive and happen.
I know this tune will have a happy ending because theres no stopping a determined dreamer.Anxiously anticipating your mystical disk...

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-02-10 01:40 AM

great! I wish you the best, and would love to hear it when it comes out

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-02-10 09:04 AM

(jumps up and down in delight) Yay!!! Oh Sunnyone, I am so happy you're turning your heart to music, yay! So tell me, what genre of music are you looking at your style to generally be? I too love to write songs and sing and hope to get recorded also and am going with rock and roll! (kiss on cheek) We're all sooooooooo proud of you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!