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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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Do you know How pointless Life would be Alone Locked in a cell My only hell Restricted I can’t breathe alone I can’t be alone How can I sleep Alone Loneliness Deafens me Visually impaired I can’t taste life Anymore Loss of senses Destroys me Breaks me down Sprawled out On the floor I cry out for no more Lack of sleep Delirious Shaking sets in I can’t cry My eyes are dry There’s no colour Without tears Fear of nothing But fear Itself Please help I long to sense A presence Even in my mind But that’s left behind In the world I can no longer Breathe with You took my freedom You took my dignity You took my senses You took my air Jailed Death. small insignificant useless me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rosie, please don't give away the key to your cell. |
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Jaime
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MemberPosts 250 |
Now take it back. Very good poem... it had a falling affect to it.. like the words were being read and then falling as the next one appeared. - Jaime a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Great Great write!!! I loved it so much, great use of words and feeling, and It kept me wanting more. It was so easy to read yet thought provoking. Well done!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I used to feel this way...till I was alone for awhile. |
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