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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I want to describe rainbow days without cliche of prisms cast-- and no there is no starbucks no coffee served while we're in line and huff the heave of our hot breath over our gloved cigarettes pretending it's not cold at all... one more time? We try again watching just a fingernail scratch across the sky... I want to write frustration of waiting lifetimes in a line a camp of a constipation's game to discover lottery is all there ever is... Fortuna? she is such a bitch. oh boy I get to spin again |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - and you do spin well... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs that she is |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know you don't want to hear this..but today I am not sure I understand this one... are you spinning to win the lottery, a lottery, any lottery..geez some times I feel so unintellectual, if there is such a word.  M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-08-2003 01:42 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, she is indeed! but sometimes she comes good. eh? This made me smile. Keep spinning m'sweet.  Maree. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...this one? is just a sarcastic little commentary on life. "spin again?" I was thinking of those old board games, you spin the little dial and advance to find your fate...okay okay, maureen, grin, so I was a in a bit of a mood... needs work, I know. But then, so do I... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I want to write frustration of waiting lifetimes in a line a camp of a constipation's game to discover lottery is all there ever is... Fortuna? she is such a bitch. Amazing, truly amazing!!! You make me dizzy Serenity~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no starbucks?  |
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