Open Poetry #24 |
I Wish (liz's valentine) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I Wish I wish to take you dancing upon a sky so blue where the only feet that touched these clouds are birds that flew I wish to sail in waters as mystic as the Nile and place your name upon the stone like they did forever in tile I wish to give you my today and present my tomorrow as your gift and sail through air and sea written forever as we drift "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This poem is a gift itself. And one to cherish. Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is beautiful... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"I wish to give you my today" No greater gift was ever bestowed a valentine. This is so lovely Thank you Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Helen, I would love to swim in the Nile River sometime, it must be so lovely down there, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful valentine, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
mmmmmmm nice comfy if i brought my canoe do you think that would do? |
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