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Written In The Stars
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Written In The Stars |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Written In The Stars Did you wish upon a star tonight when it was there shining so bright that it could not be denied? Have you ever really tried to count the tears that you’ve cried through out the passing years? Do you hide your fears so deeply that you can’t hear the voice of your own reason? Every love has its own season and it is nurtured by the light until it blooms from inside… and still..the stars can hear. I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-08-2003 12:16 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - many thoughts I read in this writing, yes I also have... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Do you hide your fears do deeply that you can’t hear the voice of your own reason? Loved that verse, and the whole of your poem. To every season...turn, turn, turn~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-07-2003 10:48 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Donna, the rhyme of this is so gentle, and soft... "and still..the stars can hear." really loved this  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Do you hide your fears do deeply that you can’t hear the voice of your own reason? very, very powerful. And, I plead the fifth. I enjoyed all of this, a good write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, well you changed that line...lol I like it both ways...  |
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Whispered Name New Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 4California, USA |
Wow, that was beautiful, It brought several ancient memories to mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I'm chuckling......I wasn't sure that worked so I changed it then you said you liked it after I changed it....but either way, thanks much. Not to forget everyone else either. Bill, thanks alot. Just some strange evening ponderings tonight... Lori, my friend....yes.....we must go on turning....special hugs for ya hon... Alyssa, ok we won't make you tell. Thanks so much for stopping by tonight. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Whispered name,thank you very much and welcome to Passions. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Gentle spirit,I guess just about everyone can relate to this. its really good |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lol...now you changed it back..good  I liked it better the first way. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Many thoughts to ponder on and very nicely presented, Donna. Hugs and have a great weekend, my friend. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Carol, thank you very much. Sea, still shaking my head at myself... Michael, hugs and thanks coming at ya. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
It is good to see you writing again. Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this. Very different. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The gentle spirit shines here. ThisDiamond |
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