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abbe
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since 2003-01-20
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0 posted 2003-02-08 07:15 AM


love is

here's what love is
two hearts embracing
the same hopes
entwined in the need
to be each others everything
and humbly knowing
without the other
each is nothing

take this dream of mine
and wrap it round you softly
feel its warmth embrace you
breathe in the wishes for only you
and fold me into your dream
until we become one whole
completed by the other

(eh... giving this valentine's day thing a shot)

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-02-08 08:13 AM


A fine shot it is... This is a wonderful view of love...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-02-08 08:36 AM


abbe
As Nan said a pretty good shot, enjoyed.

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-08 10:25 AM


Yes...this is what love is.
Described beautifuly.
Eric

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