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0 posted 2003-02-06 02:54 PM




~~~~~~~~~~
The sounds of our dreams
gently dancing
in our thoughts
softly whispering
to our minds
of our
plans

Plans of our future life
together with each other

We talk softly of our plans
as softly as
the sounds of
the wind
and of the
gentle waves
splashing
in water

Words of love, sounding soft
yet they are as clear as
the skies on a warm
summer night
with stars
sparkling
in brilliance of
light, as glimmering
diamonds

Heard as clear, are
the sounds of our dreams
as they are heard through
our minds as
whispers
gently dancing
in our
thoughts...
~~~~~~~~~~





© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-06 02:56 PM



You little ol' romantic, you...

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2 posted 2003-02-06 02:57 PM


Sound like a possible engagement. Very prettily done!
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3 posted 2003-02-06 03:04 PM


Thank you, Karilea. I have been accused of that.....
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4 posted 2003-02-06 03:05 PM


Thank you, Brad....
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5 posted 2003-02-06 03:39 PM


This is the sound of dreams...and love.
Thank you.
Eric

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6 posted 2003-02-06 03:41 PM


Thank you, Eric, for reading and replying.
I appreciate it...

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7 posted 2003-02-06 04:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as your dreams you share in your loving poetry is always so magical! (kiss on cheek) This is very touching, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2003-02-06 04:35 PM



..."gently dancing in our thoughts"


Love that line. Whole poem full of love. How nice for you....Smiles here.

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9 posted 2003-02-08 05:11 AM


A lovely Valentine post--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
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10 posted 2003-02-08 10:28 AM


'Words of love, sounding soft
yet they are as clear as
the skies on a warm
summer night
with stars
sparkling
in brilliance of
light, as glimmering
diamonds'

Warm words for another cold morning.  Enjoyed Ethel!

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