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0 posted 2003-02-07 09:10 PM









YOURS FOREVER
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/3/01

    

Let me be yours forever
There's nothing as magical as you
No matter how gray the weather
Your smile always makes my skies blue

I want to be yours forever
You are the one I've been looking for my whole life
When you are with me, I can never feel happier
The way your lips sing, the way your eyes shine

    
    

I can be yours forever,
I just want to mnake you the happiest lover you can be
I think of you all the time, you are my dream lover
You are my personal heaven, both in and out of my dreams

I'll be yours forever, please take me
Listen to my heart sing for you
I need you, I know magic exists when you are beside me
Let me be yours forever, love, I love you!

    













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-08-2003 01:22 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-07 09:13 PM


Noah, I just love your candy heart poems...they are so sweet! I think this is one of the best ones yet!
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2 posted 2003-02-07 10:14 PM


Noah - your candy heart poems are lovely...

BC

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3 posted 2003-02-07 10:16 PM


Your words speak of a loving heart.
Beautiful!
Eric

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4 posted 2003-02-07 11:08 PM


Noah, this is so lovely i really like it.


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5 posted 2003-02-07 11:34 PM


Noah, this is a lovely valentines day poem.
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6 posted 2003-02-08 12:08 PM


ah Noah, this is just beautiful!!  This is precious!
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7 posted 2003-02-09 05:35 PM


nice
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8 posted 2003-02-09 06:15 PM


Beautiful once again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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9 posted 2003-02-09 07:43 PM


Noah, I have read everyone of your candy heart poems and am loving this series. The words, the pictures, the presentation are just stunning and oh so terribly romantic.

Thank you for sharing them with all of us.

Huggles, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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10 posted 2003-02-09 09:39 PM


Noah - All of these poems for Valentines are such treasures!! Wonderful. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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11 posted 2003-02-09 09:48 PM


Beautiful Noah....these are so sweet!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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12 posted 2003-02-10 02:52 AM


you certainly put a great deal of effort intot hese...much appreciated...sending hugs
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