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Arrow Worship
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Arrow Worship |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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One day an arrow was held taut by a bowman whose target in the field, waited to be punctured... appetites of marksmanship pulled pointed troves whose target in the field, waited to be punctured.. one day an arrow was held taut by a bowman One day that final sister arrow was released. The world of bystanders realized how silly they were.. they allowed weapons of mass destruction to proliferate... the world of bystanders realized how silly they were, one day that the final arrow was released one day mutated decendents rallied for arrow day, to celebrate their indifference to a nuclear arms race and strangely worshipped the very weapon that erased... to celebrate their indifference to a nuclear arms race, one day mutated descendents rallied for arrow day [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-07-2003 06:59 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is really great imagery. Eric |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Unfortunately, that could very well happen. Very good write! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
that's why I wrote this  ..thanks for sharing |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes the imagery is well done! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Man the imagery is awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice format here...never seen this before. Sort of reminds me of my Logic class |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Brilliant work! LOGIC CLASS?!?!? Isn't that an oxy moron? Susan C. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Your poem is frightening, thoughtfully well conceived and written - sent shivers down my spine! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
"If world war three is fought with nuclear weapons.World war four will be fought with rocks and sticks" Albert Einstein paladin |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
That's right Paladin, back to the stone age, that's where the war machine is taking us and fast...hopefully not in my lifetime. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thank you all for your comments..time for all of us to get to work in our communities and get people more aware of what we ought to be doing. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Susan, I took a course in mathematical logic and could have said logic class too |
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