Open Poetry #24 |
I Guess That's All She Wrote |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
I was looking at the poetry, I've written through the years. Some of it caused me to smile, And some brought me to tears... I asked myself, "Why bother? It's such a waste of time. And who would take the trouble- To read these words of mine?" The dreams of youth are fleeting- Old age is coming fast. And foolish is the person, Still living in their past. Why do I keep on writing, Of a time that's now long past- When every time a gate swung wide, I knew could be my last? And every girl I chanced to meet- I pictured as a queen, With love, as in the wanderlust... The next hill's still more green. I think my words are failing me, I've nothing left to say. I search for inspiration, But it all just fades away. So now I take my quill in hand- To write one more short note... And as Hank Williams used to say- I guess that's all she wrote. |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
Great poem with good content i enjoyed it |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gunslinger - If you stop writing your tales, well I'll just have to come find you and kick you in yours!! lol. Enjoy your poetry always. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I read your poems, John...and I enjoy the straight forward style you write with...don't stop.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I've always enjoyed your stories John... Don't you dare stop...ever! Ya hear me!!?? ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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jenn21e Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 10 |
i loved your poem! your accessible style of writing is quite refreshing! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I always love reading what you have to say John. So keep the pen in your hand and the paper in your pocket, because I want to read more. K? Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love to read your poems. I try to reply to everybody's poems that I read, but sometimes just don't get to. Don't stop writing. I'm sure a lot of other people read your poems, too. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-11-2003 10:12 PM).] |
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