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Open Poetry #24

Rose

nichola_louise
Junior Member

since 2002-08-17

Posts 24
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2003-02-06 04:34 AM

Rose

The delicate petal of a rose
The colour deep, lasting long
Mirrors how I feel for you
Contradictions, fragile and strong

The thorny stalk of a rose
The barbs sharp, causing pain
Mirrors how you've treated me
Betrayal, my heart Abel, your words Cain

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

1 posted 2003-02-06 04:47 AM

tragically beautiful

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2003-02-06 06:24 AM

A rose never loses it's beauty.
Your poem expresses both the beauty and agony of love.

Deb

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-02-11 06:59 PM

Well said...James

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

4 posted 2003-02-11 08:10 PM

mmm very good.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-02-11 08:11 PM

nichola_louise - never looked at a rose like this before, so very true...

BC

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-02-11 10:34 PM

Ouch...

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-02-11 11:52 PM

Betrayal, my heart Abel, your words Cain

loved this ending

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-11 11:53 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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