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freedom from desire
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freedom from desire |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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everyone is down came and saw time to look around fame is construed (spelling ?) this frame moves tamed freedom desires wisdom, bounded by experience this life is so unknown my fate, my shame fullblown ive fallen so many times hate to taste hate to waste passion deep from within cant resist a gain i want success,never wanna lose everyone looks the same and all over the place iam to blame when i sleep i rarely desire to wake reality hits me hard truth knocks me down what i want i can never have complications resulting in dishonesty lie,lie to me, go ahead and try sweet baby face of shame marked my pain desire my reign |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This seems straight from the heart to the pen...passion flowing freely. Great poem. Eric |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Black Swan - like the style of this writing, deep thoughts within... BC |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I really like the style of this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
painful write...sad to me...I can relate |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I feel the suffering here. A straight to the point poem. enjoyed  Maree. |
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