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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2003-02-06 06:26 PM


I know it's late, but still wanted to write a tribute to those seven Astronauts


I thought seven was a lucky number
But not that day I guess
The lifes of seven beautiful people
Ended in a terrible mess

Hopes were high when they returned
All the way from Heaven
But suddenly they belong to the past
Beautiful people, all seven

We will remember what they were
Those seven Astronauts
We'll keep moving from where they left
Because they never had doubts

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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1 posted 2003-02-06 06:44 PM


Very nice, Titia. And it is never too late to honor the bravery and dedication of these great adventurers.
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2 posted 2003-02-06 06:47 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Kacy is right, it is never too late, because they will always be remembered and held closely to our hearts! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this dedication is so very heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2003-02-06 06:49 PM


a beautiful honor to the fallen
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2003-02-06 07:41 PM



Oh dear, I think I messed up the rhyming again in the last stanza, because of my pronounciation of astranauts, so if you please will read it in my Dutchie way, it will be rhyming perfectly to doubts

And thanks for being so nice to this Dutchie.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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