Open Poetry #24 |
Just Me |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Just Me A soft breeze tickles my ear I swear I hear something but straining I hear no knight in shining armor no angel wings fluttering just me BloomingRose |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Just, you? no, no, thats not how it works. You, are much more than 'just' This is short but powerful. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is sweetly beautiful. I really loved it! Eric |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Deb! Lovely! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Big grin...even the beauty of nature paled in your light on this page. ThisDiamond |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Short and sweet. A very nice writing. Good job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, you have the music in your heart so let it whisper on liken the zephyr! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is comforting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
A poem I'll likely recall next time a light breeze touches the back of my neck. Very nice! |
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seven_conscious Junior Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 33 |
quick and pretty. liked it a lot |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all very much for you thoughtful warm replies. Hugs, Deb |
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