Open Poetry #24 |
Valentine’s Warmth |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Valentine’s Warmth here is a seed for you a small tiny gift a valentine of hope to be planted in the snow warmth given just for that uprooted sleeping heart could bring forth softer petals in the spring strength now slowly wakes in weakness "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-06-2003 09:03 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this made me smile ..still smiling Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh nHelen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as such warmth and love floods these words! (kiss on cheek) This is a true gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a lovely Valentine Helen. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The seed blooms with love. This is such a sweet poem. Thank you. Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is a beautiful Valentine's wish. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Lovely |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and it shall gain more strength with new growth....Lovely.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... I especially like the lines bring forth softer petals in the spring as always... I am impressed with your brevity |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done Valentine gal.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - warmth is good, nice write... BC |
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