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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-02-06 05:32 PM


Valentine’s Warmth


here is
a seed
for you
a small
tiny gift
a valentine
of hope
to be
planted in
the snow
warmth given
just for
that uprooted
sleeping heart
could bring
forth softer
petals in
the spring
strength now
slowly wakes
in weakness



"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-06-2003 09:03 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-06 05:32 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
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2 posted 2003-02-06 05:50 PM


this made me smile
..still smiling


Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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3 posted 2003-02-06 06:59 PM




(smiles) Oh nHelen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as such warmth and love floods these words! (kiss on cheek) This is a true gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-06 07:12 PM


Such a lovely Valentine Helen.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-02-07 09:08 AM


The seed blooms with love.
This is such a sweet poem.
Thank you.
Eric

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6 posted 2003-02-07 09:10 AM


Helen, this is a beautiful
Valentine's wish.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-02-07 09:12 AM


1slick_lady
Lovely

Nan
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8 posted 2003-02-07 09:58 AM


...and it shall gain more strength with new growth....Lovely..
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9 posted 2003-02-07 10:07 AM


very nice... I especially like the lines
bring
forth softer
petals in
the spring


as always... I am impressed with your brevity

Toerag
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10 posted 2003-02-07 10:37 AM


Nicely done Valentine gal..
Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-02-07 10:49 AM


helen - warmth is good, nice write...

BC

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