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Images of You
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Images of You |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Images of You My mind wanders to visions beyond daily sight Times unknown to anyone but us A surprise encounter taking my breath away Memories for which there are no visuals. Conversations where we are the only participants Movie productions made no audience needed Expressions unseen by naked eye Resting forever in a heart on angel wings fly. An all access pass to my life Helping guide me through the pain Feeling closer than ever before Your touch a warm breeze lighting my spark. Knowing you are by my side Loving me today as much as yesterday Forgiving my shortcomings seeing my strengths Beautiful soul adding peacefulness to my day. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, this is a beautiful poem. It has a loving, tender feeling. I enjoyed reading it...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lovely. Like a great deal. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Amazing how you've put memories into such a beautiful and tender poem. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaaahhh... sweet, delicate, strong and beautiful write. Thank you so much for sharing! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is so romantic and has a soft comfort to your heart! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy to see you posting again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Knowing you are by my side Loving me today as much as yesterday Forgiving my shortcomings seeing my strengths Beautiful soul adding peacefulness to my day. *********** Dawn, this sounds like a wonderful love affair! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dawn...this is a most beautiful write.. Sounds like love to me. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Thank you all for your beautiful replies. I guess this poem has many layers and meanings which can be interpreted by various readers. This poem was written in my mind about a special friendship. One of my oldest friends died a few months ago and this poem to me talks about how even though she is not on Earth anymore our friendship still remains. The only difference is that she is always with me, she never has to leave my side now, not even for one min. Even though this is the theme I read in my poem, I always enjoy the different ways my words are interpreted by others and I hope someday my words can bring a bit of comfort to another or a smile to their face. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This poem is teeming with layers indeed... You've written a lovely tribute to your friend and the friendship you shared, Dawn... |
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