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DawnG
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0 posted 2003-02-05 01:06 AM


Images of You

My mind wanders to visions beyond daily sight
Times unknown to anyone but us
A surprise encounter taking my breath away
Memories for which there are no visuals.

Conversations where we are the only participants
Movie productions made no audience needed
Expressions unseen by naked eye
Resting forever in a heart on angel wings fly.

An all access pass to my life
Helping guide me through the pain
Feeling closer than ever before
Your touch a warm breeze lighting my spark.

Knowing you are by my side
Loving me today as much as yesterday
Forgiving my shortcomings seeing my strengths
Beautiful soul adding peacefulness to my day.


© Copyright 2003 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-05 01:37 AM


Dawn, this is a beautiful poem. It has a loving, tender feeling. I enjoyed reading it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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2 posted 2003-02-05 01:47 AM



Lovely. Like a great deal. Pat

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3 posted 2003-02-05 02:30 AM


wonderful write...
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4 posted 2003-02-06 05:14 PM


Amazing how you've put memories into such a beautiful and tender poem.
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5 posted 2003-02-06 05:16 PM


Aaaaahhh... sweet, delicate, strong and beautiful write.

Thank you so much for sharing!

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6 posted 2003-02-06 05:20 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is so romantic and has a soft comfort to your heart! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy to see you posting again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-02-06 08:16 PM


Knowing you are by my side
Loving me today as much as yesterday
Forgiving my shortcomings seeing my strengths
Beautiful soul adding peacefulness to my day.
***********
Dawn, this sounds like a wonderful love affair!

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8 posted 2003-02-06 08:40 PM


Dawn...this is a most beautiful write..
Sounds like love to me.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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9 posted 2003-02-06 11:39 PM


Thank you all for your beautiful replies. I guess this poem has many layers and meanings which can be interpreted by various readers. This poem was written in my mind about a special friendship.

One of my oldest friends died a few months ago and this poem to me talks about how even though she is not on Earth anymore our friendship still remains. The only difference is that she is always with me, she never has to leave my side now, not even for one min.

Even though this is the theme I read in my poem, I always enjoy the different ways my words are interpreted by others and I hope someday my words can bring a bit of comfort to another or a smile to their face.

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10 posted 2003-02-07 10:11 AM


This poem is teeming with layers indeed... You've written a lovely tribute to your friend and the friendship you shared, Dawn...
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