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Open Poetry #24

An Ecstatic Haiku

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-02-06 05:29 PM

You are my sweet Truth.
Drowning in you, Ecstasy…
Smiles play in my Soul.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-06 05:30 PM

Yes I like this very much

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-02-06 05:45 PM

"Smiles play in my soul"

Like that a great deal!

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-02-06 05:46 PM

smiles play in my soul
what a beautiful line

I'll be imagining that all day because it makes smiles... come to my soul. Thank you.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2003-02-06 06:40 PM

Nice senryu!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-02-06 07:21 PM

Structured beauty.
Eric

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-02-06 07:22 PM

Very nicely done and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

7 posted 2003-02-06 07:26 PM

very good!!!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-02-07 09:44 AM

nicely done...

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-02-07 11:21 AM

A smiling soul is a good thing...

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

10 posted 2003-02-07 11:39 AM

More 'smiles' than you know!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-02-07 03:05 PM

This senryu made my soul smile!

well done.

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-07-2003 03:06 PM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-02-07 03:19 PM

This "Senryu" was as sweet as a Cinnamon bun!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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