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Zephyr
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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You are different from what one is used to keeping house below time and a thistle in your wild shoes over wild roots where love has fallen over wounded ground. You are of summer mature, warm rarer than wealth in this age of the mad-man of hatred and greed. You are of none of these but an architect of peace a cathedral of dreams and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair |
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Jaime
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MemberPosts 250 |
"and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair" I really like this a lot. Your descriptions were excellent. - Jaime  Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
... well speechless this is just...can't even look at it critically - it's just superb mmy, superb...masterful even - let me return the compliment.. hugs my sweet soul sister...you've done well with this one..  K |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
damn.... your talent is showing..and glad I stopped to stare... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but an architect of peace a cathedral of dreams and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair ===================================== I just love your poetry...you have a distinctive style of creating rich images and textures with your words...as well as gift with personification and expression and do it all with tight, succinct, poetry. My only complaint is that you dont post often enough  Excellent writing !!! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow!! This is a wonderul write Maree. I'm so glad I looked in here and found this caress of verse. It's lovely  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--This really is exceptional, rich poetry. Good to see you! Hugs! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Maree, this reminded me of the beautiful Red Hot Chili Peppers song "The Zephyr Song", I LOVE IT!!! "Fly away on my zephyr I feel it more than ever And in this perfect weather We'll find a place together" From The Zephyr Song Red Hot Chili Peppers- By The Way: 2002  (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always soar with love in your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jaime thank you for your lovely reply and the "excellent". Thanks for stopping by. Kamla hmmm I have you speechless? well that is a very hard thing to do LOL...no seriously, thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Cpat thank you so much. I'm glad you stopped to stare as well.  Janet Marie It's always lovely to see you and read your lovely replies. Thank you. My only complaint is that you dont post often enough Believe me that is mine too. If it doesnt come it doesnt come... shrug. Thanks again and hugs. Ms Rose, Thanks for caressing me with your sweet reply and hug. (f) Martie, sweet lady, thank you for stopping by and reading me and for your always loving replies. hugs. Aenimal Thankyou Handsome. Noah Thank you so much glad you enjoyed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah....now this is good. One of your best Maree!! It's nice to see you here.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is stunningly beautiful. Keeping this one safe in my library. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Maree- long time my sweet friend! i've missed seeing your work and talking to you. i am sorry i've not been around lately. this is as always just beautiful. your imagery and description through the years i've known you has only gotten better & better with time. im not sure im here to stay at Pips, but im glad i saw this. take care sweetie. feel free to drop me a email if you get time. [email protected]. bye for now amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting concept..."binding poems into my hair." James |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
One of those you just can't stop reading. One of your best Mmy, and very beautiful. Hugs JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, thank you lovely lady, it's nice to see you here too Mitnitesun: hey thank you for your lovely reply and for adding to your library. Ms Amy: Wow, where have you been? Nice to see you here hon. Thank you for yor lovely reply. And... stop changing that email addy. JamesMichael: Thank you for stopping by and having a read. Glad you found it interesting. Jamie, how ae you sweetie, Thank you for your lovely reply and compliment. Nice to see you here. |
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