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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-06 04:26 PM



I’m off
On another of my adventures
Oh god how I love to leave this all behind

As my head hits the pillow
I smile
But tears fall
I’m happy
But sad
Lonely
But glad
This is my space
My reality

You all live for the light of day
But my life isn’t lead
Your way

I live in sleep
Where as my tears
Meet the ground
I am lifted up
And flown around
In my space
The place where I face my fears
And never have to show tears
Because I am resting my head
Right here in my bed

This is life
How I want it to be
But mysteriously
Out of my control

That’s how I love to live
I don’t wait for another day
I live the night away
And down here
In my lonely dreams
I can be me
Without fear of the rest
Without being put to the test

Everything I say is mine
Everything I do is mine
It’s all mine
The only thing left
That only belongs to me
This is my space
My world
My dreams.

small insignificant useless me

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-06 05:14 PM


I love this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
Posts 217

2 posted 2003-02-06 05:22 PM


Ohhh... such bittersweet lonely happiness.  Such a mix of emotions...

Lovely... thank you for sharing this!

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-02-06 05:26 PM


Rosie, even though this is sad to me, it's
still beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.  

seven_conscious
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 33

4 posted 2003-02-06 05:38 PM


very nice : )  i enjoyed the rythem.
poohbear19
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since 2003-02-02
Posts 94
Colorado, USA
5 posted 2003-02-06 05:52 PM


good poem

andrea

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