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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-06 03:57 AM


life is a field of green grass the flows
like an emerald ocean
as the warm breeze gently bends its tips

life is like a busy monday morning
people bussling
and trying to get to there destination
all at the same time

in a blink of an eye
we could lose it all
in the tick of a clock
we could fall

like a drop of water
we hold life in our hands
like the rest of the world
we are all living life no matter what speed
or what we visualize our individul lives to be

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-02-06 10:12 AM


Wow....I really loved this one.
A strong depths of feeling.
Eric

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-02-06 05:49 PM


in a blink of an eye
we could lose it all
in the tick of a clock
we could fall
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So true, so true.
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