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You Don't Know Me
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You Don't Know Me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I wrote this short one for a guy that swore he feel in love with me the first time he saw me (he embarrassed me in a meeting). Stalked me for 2 weeks (via phone). So very creepy.. You Don't know Me Don’t look my way If it’s not the person you see Don’t touch me Unless you know what my favorite color would be Don’t try to talk, on any day If you can’t hear what I say Don’t tell me how good I look If you’re only judging the cover of the book The outside is not all I am So if that is all you can see Just walk away from me |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
OH! I liked this one alot! Very sassy & to the point. Good job! BlueEyes |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cool. I like it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very well expressed... Charisma |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
You tell him! Be strong!!  Thank you! |
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seven_conscious Junior Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 33 |
quick and catchy! i liked it! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
i hate that. I say don't just love cause I'm beautiful but the whole person. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
mmhmm! good job! too many people just go for the looks and never see the ~real you~ I like the poem! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You got that right! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Way cool!!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
You make your point well! It must be really spooky to be stalked. Deb |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I hope that he got the point.  |
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