Open Poetry #24 |
Mock me Not |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Mock me not…. Diffident, but not contemptuous, there, no, here, is the difference, between you, and me… you do not and probably never will understand that tearing down my defenses only builds my resolve… who are you to judge me when you do not know what goes on behind closed doors… and your so called perceived perception gives you your only will power to speak. Ye of loud voice, and less manners, I know you… and you will stumble and I, I would have held out my hand, but you… you do not need me. You have your own walls to climb over. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and you will stumble and I, I would have held out my hand, but you… you do not need me. You have your own walls to climb over." ============================================ Whoa Deca girl! You sure tell it like it is. Enjoyed the read! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
No punches pulled in this...very clearly stated... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful...beautiful. Eric |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"who are you to judge me when you do not know what goes on behind closed doors…" yeah....exactly. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) I think so many cheat to perfect the pole vault or climb the wall in that matter, you must start by loving and appreciating yourself and climbing your on walls before you are capable of resolving others! (sigh) my thoughts are with you, sweet friend, this is poignant, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, have I ever felt that feeling...... Never thought to write about it though -- Rats! I missed my chance! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, there are lots of people who thrive on judging others and putting them down. I guess it makes them feel bigger or something. Really, I think it's jealousy, of sorts.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is powerful! I felt it. I wish people would think twice.. or three or four times before they speak, or act. But then that pertains to everyone.. sorry thinking aloud. Enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
someone found your post toasties I see... and I bet you prefer milk... ( chuckling) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And climb over their own walls they shall... Well penned vent, Deca.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame Well done, enjoyed. |
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