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DECEIVED ME
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Here is my fear You hold no remorse This pain is caused by you And you are the source I feel sorrow in the day And cry all night You were my angel You used to shine so bright Deceived by someone who didn’t care And by love that was never there |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so very sad...*hugs for you* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sun of faith - words of sadness you write, my best to you... BC |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is sad...yet I am reminded that love is never lost. We are the love that we are looking for. Its all here. Very beautiful poetry. Eric |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is so sad, and you expressed it well in few words ..but it just reminds me so much more how humans fail.. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-08-2003 01:15 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
People do go the 'other way' if they don't get an even break..although it could be argued if that is the 'other way'...like the perspective here  |
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