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To Heather
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To Heather |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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When you arrive here, I fear You’ll have to suspend your ideals I am more than my words As well as much less Alas Can you pack away Most of your doubt And leave it behind? The bit that remains We can mix with my own Cast it into the wind That blows by this shack Watch it drift down the river Let it float out of sight The small hope that we have For a future together We can sow with the lilies That will grow in the spring Your ticket will be there Will you be on the plane? To watch the drift? To grow the lilies? Je t'aime Ed... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ed...it will all work out don't worry...i personally am a great believer in love...here is some hope...catch...helen |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Ed... It will work out. I know.....  My Love and I are working it out...day by day ...one moment at a time.....  Hugs from Ethel  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How exciting! Passionate poetry in motion, in real touch time.  Love lilies in the spring. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this Ed..and hope it all works for the best... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this is so warm and full of new love and expectations.. and doubts to be cast to the wind. Perhaps she will also grow some Heather? Lovely..so very much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Best of Luck~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Much love and luck to you both! and Heather? See? He is easy to love!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
We are kin. Thanks for posting this beautifully written piece, so I could ride with you a little way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I am more than my words As well as much less Alas Wow Ed, powerful write. But don't sell yourself short either. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Ed..... Je t'aime Beautiful....thank you! Kisses and Hugs Heather |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Amazingly beautiful write. Wow. Such longing... such fear and hope and love all at once... Thank you! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is a very special Valentine to give and to receive. I wish you the kind of love that lasts longer than your sweetest dream. Believe in it and be happy you two~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-06-2003 10:34 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...I am more than my words As well as much less... Amen Aren't we all? ...Alas Wranx, thank you...for you belie this..." I have never written, never desired to write, and now this. Perhaps it's just one of those passing things, like bowling or decoupage." Not passing. Not at all... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, this reminded me of more than I'll get into, suffice it to say...I'm smiling. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Spiritual and sentimental. And a perfect departure point for my own vacation. Sayonara. .m. I know it's over. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A truly revealing piece of work, Ed...I can feel the anticipation mixed with anxiousness..but I sense a rendezvous most fullfilling for you and Heather...you'll both enjoy the scent of the lilies in bloom.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautiful words of love wranx - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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