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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Feet tramped, The ram's horns blew; A quake took Jericho. Eight million horns here, feet tramping, Tramping.... [This message has been edited by Ratleader (02-06-2003 01:29 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this one makes me grin I suppose this means the walls fell for a reason other than just feet tramping and horns blowing, eh? I'm glad I live in the country! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
plenty of that in little Pensacola too! Glad i have the beach to escape to! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Alot said in few words. And wonderfuly chosen words! Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...interesting comparison. Your not having a premonition are you? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
My pappy says that if California DOESN"T fall into the sea like the doomsday people say, God owes Sodom and Gomorrah an apology....... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ya... but all of California has been retrofitted for our protection. Just hope nobody breaks the seal, 'cause that's gonna be one hell of a flush.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm with Dixie, P'Cola's big enough for me to go to when I want to go to "town" and get away from the quietness of the country...and I do miss the noise sometimes, even though I haven't lived in town for a few years, now, that's really "home" to me. . . By the way, I've heard the saying about "Sodom and Gomorrah" a lot over the years.... especially in Church.......  With hugs from Ethel  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I absolutely love this one! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, noisey freeway traffic downtown? or just another Shake 'n Bake, LA style? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Heh--- caught me! Wrote this while sitting on a plastic lawn "chair" outside the garage, pondering whether to wait for my car to come down off the rack, or walk the mile home..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent write |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh yeah, RE my comment above, I walked home, and by the time I got there I had half of what became "Japan" ( /pip/Forum76/HTML/002247.html )composed in my head. Some quakes happen INSIDE. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (02-07-2003 09:50 AM).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
MORE excellent minimalism...yippee skippee...K's getting happy...  K |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hi Severn, gladdaseeya! Check the Workshop -- Me 'n Nan are working on it as the topic for February. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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