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Two Things Happened
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Two Things Happened |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Two Things Happened First, there had to be the soft fall tender, beautiful, I thought hello, life…  the so very soft, quiet, not at all Kansas like fall of life giving white, of life giving moisture and two things happened… life, and  hope hope happens, hope, and more…. Life happens in a snowfall…. Can you see it? crystallized forces of new beginnings…. comprehensible life forces…. all of which can be brushed away, easily with a whisk of broom… don’t be a snowflake… be a moment. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-06-2003 11:52 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Awesome!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Life happens in a snowfall…. Can you see it? crystallized forces of new beginnings…. comprehensible life forces…. all of which can be brushed away, easily with a whisk of broom… don’t be a snowflake… be a moment. oh yes...  I love it when you do this |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The best poems leave you with something that does not fade, does not grow stale with time. Thanks for this one. "don’t be a snowflake… be a moment." So simple. So clear. So true. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You just made a third thing happen. It's called expansion...of my library's boundaries.  I promise not to be a flake. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, and so very, very beautiful...  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I find this slightly funny, because for an assignment once I had to do a "my life is like..." poem and I compared my life to a snowflake! So maybe I oughta work on that moment thing  But this is exquisitely beautiful, and makes me feel light hearted. Thanks. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
crystallized forces of new beginnings…. comprehensible life forces…. all of which can be brushed away, easily with a whisk of broom… Loved this stanza, Sunshine. A lesson on how we should see important things for what they are and not dismiss them away unknowingly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazingly beautiful thoughts here Karilea.. Much enjoyed this morning. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
Oh Sunshine, this is so beautiful. You brought a little 'sunshine' into my life this morning reading this (though some snow wouldnt hurt either *grin*) Great job! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm watching the snowflakes... Many, many moments here... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yeah..two things happened... I got colder than heck..and the traffic was a bear.. ( chuckling) very nicely done my friend...and you would see the best in everything I think... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--So beautiful with your words. Happy to have my sun flakes here.  |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
So soothing. Very pleasant read Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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