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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
0 posted 2003-02-05 10:13 PM

The merging of two,
souls in gentle osmosis
of flesh upon flesh
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1 posted 2003-02-05 10:20 PM

I like the usage of the term "osmosis"   This perfectly captures a moment.
carol
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2 posted 2003-02-05 10:52 PM

i like this
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-05 10:53 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-02-05 10:59 PM


Yes!
Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-02-05 11:46 PM

takes a humble vow to the kind replies
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singapore
6 posted 2003-02-06 03:35 AM

good use of "osmosis" here..wish i have thought of it
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-02-06 03:38 AM

whew!
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