Open Poetry #24 |
Eyes |
bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
tired eyes weary eyes looking for you brown eyes so passionate they shine will a renewed sexualty brown eyes that twinkle with mischief blue eyes caribbean sea bedroom eyes blue eyes so clear you can look into my soul brown eyes that see what other can not but sometimes looks past the obvious blues eyes that hope filled with compassion and understanding brown eyes aggressive with desire if properly motivated blue eyes not docile but receptive tired eyes weary eyes looking for you always there but sometimes blind to bright sunshine and full moons |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the discriptiveness. awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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*Star* Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 32Iowa |
I love your descriptions, I can "see" exactly what you're writing about |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ooh, aah, how i wish someone would write about my sparkling brown eyes, like he used to, many moons ago.............woe is me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
did you see her eyes over the atlantic, in your first class seat, glass of dewars in your executive hand, wearing a 20plus tarnished gold band? did u,huh, did you,? |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I fly coach unless I get a complimentary upgrade, I hate dewars, lost the tarnished band a long time ago and she weighed 250lbs. I gave her 1/2 my seat cause I am a gentleman and she wore tinted glasses but really couldnt see her eyes because of the lbs of makeup. Otherwise she was perfect. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I can feel the longing in your words. Bittersweet and beautiful. Thank you... for sharing. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
coach? kind of hard to make the milehigh club over there........and i thought you were a highroller |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked your description of the eyes. Very pretty... "Love makes the world go around" |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Coach.....hey I got a budget. |
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