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For just a moment.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It’s when I’ve left my soul open forgot the need to defend memories of you find me and ohh...I miss you friend The song plays gently in the corner of my mind thoughts come rushing in ...the ones I wanted left behind the world stops for just a moment ....the length of that sweet tune I allow myself the moment that leaves me much too soon and with a heart still aching I smile and return to pretend I don’t really miss you ...don’t still call you friend..... ~SEA~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 sad, but beautifully written. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This aches Susan...truly a beautiful yet sad write. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh my you captured the ache so well and ..so majestically. Pretending, is painful. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just a moment... is enough some times |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - thought provoking words from someone who writes with her heart... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Susan, this is so very sadly written, sweet friend, sometimes that is a better alternative though we learn from each other and out of it all I suppose is a moral that is essential to hang onto! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It’s when I’ve left my soul open forgot the need to defend memories of you find me and ohh...I miss you friend The song plays gently in the corner of my mind thoughts come rushing in ...the ones I wanted left behind ===================================== ( youknowthatiknowthatyouknowiknow)   |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Ohhh... how tragically beautiful. Brings to the surface emotions of a friend lost for me. Bittersweet... Thank you... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, SEA! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, this one hurts....... Heart Hugs to you, too...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA....where you've come.... my friend.... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I smile and return to pretend I don’t really miss you ...don’t still call you friend..... I forget who's quote this was and quite sure I am mangling the original but it reads something like: The key to happiness is good health and a bad memory |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
beautifully written Sue.....sad content....(understandable content with me.)..but otherwise great job. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Sea, this is so sad but i liked it |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love this!! thanks for sharing - keep smiling - love Roniece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens that way...  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Some moments are meant only to stir our hearts. You write well of the pain and sadness of fleeting things. Deb |
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