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El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-02-05 05:36 PM


It is so hard to say goodbye to a friend. But it is a part of life, and so often their is nothing to do but say, "Goodbye... I'll see you on the other side."

~~~~~~~

I remember the many smiles
That decorated our faces
And the laughs that echoed and filled
All my heart’s empty places

And I ask—why do we move on?
Why did that heaven have to end?
Did growing up really mean
That you were no longer a friend?

Ah, but I am slowly learning
God is love, and He is sovereign
And that He will do what is best
And we’ll see each other again

I know I’ll miss you many times
But today I must say goodbye
I’ll see you on the other side
Beyond the blueness of the sky



© Copyright 2003 Benjamin Graber - All Rights Reserved
BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
Posts 152
TX, USA
1 posted 2003-02-05 05:40 PM


Oh my - this was so beautiful and touching - I lost a brother and the pain was like no other I've ever felt - thank you for sharing this.... it brings to mind that there is hope.
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-02-05 09:30 PM


Ah, but I am slowly learning
God is love, and He is sovereign
And that He will do what is best
And we’ll see each other again

I know I’ll miss you many times
But today I must say goodbye
I’ll see you on the other side
Beyond the blueness of the sky

=================================

the sincerety of this touching piece is as lovely as your cadenced kissed rhymes.
a beautiful tribute to your friend.
well done poet sir.
jm


carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-02-06 12:16 PM


El-Campeador, This poem is so sad but i loved it
Elie
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since 2003-02-04
Posts 14
New York, USA
4 posted 2003-02-06 01:13 AM


Bravo!  It touched my heart
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-02-06 01:19 AM


this brought tears to my eyes, and touched me deeply.
I've lost many close to me, and one in particular and you are right that youslowly learn, God IS sovereign, and we will see them on the other side.
*sigh* thank you.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-02-06 02:47 AM


yes...
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2003-02-07 01:27 AM



El_Campeador~
This is absolutely beautiful and so very touching.
Thank you for sharing this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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