Open Poetry #24 |
I'll See you On The Other Side |
El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is so hard to say goodbye to a friend. But it is a part of life, and so often their is nothing to do but say, "Goodbye... I'll see you on the other side." ~~~~~~~ I remember the many smiles That decorated our faces And the laughs that echoed and filled All my heart’s empty places And I ask—why do we move on? Why did that heaven have to end? Did growing up really mean That you were no longer a friend? Ah, but I am slowly learning God is love, and He is sovereign And that He will do what is best And we’ll see each other again I know I’ll miss you many times But today I must say goodbye I’ll see you on the other side Beyond the blueness of the sky |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Oh my - this was so beautiful and touching - I lost a brother and the pain was like no other I've ever felt - thank you for sharing this.... it brings to mind that there is hope. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ah, but I am slowly learning God is love, and He is sovereign And that He will do what is best And we’ll see each other again I know I’ll miss you many times But today I must say goodbye I’ll see you on the other side Beyond the blueness of the sky ================================= the sincerety of this touching piece is as lovely as your cadenced kissed rhymes. a beautiful tribute to your friend. well done poet sir. jm
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
El-Campeador, This poem is so sad but i loved it |
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Elie Junior Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 14New York, USA |
Bravo! It touched my heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this brought tears to my eyes, and touched me deeply. I've lost many close to me, and one in particular and you are right that youslowly learn, God IS sovereign, and we will see them on the other side. *sigh* thank you. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
El_Campeador~ This is absolutely beautiful and so very touching. Thank you for sharing this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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