»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #24
»
- Tears -
| Open Poetry #24 |
|
- Tears - |
|
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
|
Trickling Liquid Drips, Glazed Echo Drops, Traces Filling Voided Thoughts. - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (01-30-2003 08:33 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 GG - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, I like this very much. What would we do without ability to cry. I once went five years without crying one drop. Amazes me now, for half the poems here bring tears to my eyes.... the like creativity and conciseness of this.... hugs and love, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-31-2003 08:17 AM).] |
||
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Pat, thanks for replying. Five years? wow thats a long time, too long. I went about a year, the previous year without a tear, and still goe months on end now. But poetry bleeds like tears.. thats why I write about it  again, thank you. love, and hugs to you. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh yuh |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, now you've turned on my waterworks! Amazing how much emotion can be elicited from so few words. Warm angel hugs, EA |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GG, tears can help...whether they're tears of joy or sadness...  "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
walt, thanks for yuh reply *grin* appreciated. EA, it is amazing, isn't it? its frightening too, because from the same lips and the same number of words can come tears feeling hate, anger, love.. anything. Thanks for your reply and reading garysgirl, amen they can. Whats bad is when you cannot cry. After so long of being 'tough' you block out the ability, and then can't cry when you really need to. But they are such a soothing and needed part of life! thanks for replyingAlways, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
||
|
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Alyssa, thanks for the inspiration for my little senryus. I couldn't get these thoughts your poem brought out of my mind. Hope you don't mind.... "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
of course I don't mind! in fact, glad I could inspire you. (gonna have my dad drive me to school lol) God's blessings to you! and have a good day with your parents. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me shed a tear too as I know how tears hold so much heart and soul within them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Yes! |
||
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Noah, Dixie, thank you both Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
