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Knotted Hold
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Knotted Hold |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Birth threads that connect us can twist and knot but never be severed. Those of one always entangled making understanding hard to digest. Years in the making, the one knot unties allowing the freedom to be, each their own and enjoy the offerings of give and take. But then another ligament begins its choke. The crimp regains its hold, causing doubt and hurt and dares one to make amends, always one-sided, always accommodating, catering to the host to slow down the warring words, to appease the mind, to coexist in this knotted world. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed the expression. Great write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Well you got that right, LOL enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Julie. Sy, Families...you can't pick them...have to learn to live with them. *s hugsssss M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Maureen, i love your ability to put your feelings into words. You do it so beautifully. I wish I could express myself that well. Take care, friend.....  Ethel |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very lovely write  enjoyed it hugs, kelly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! you would write this when my brother is coming in town this weekend! wow! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'to slow down the warring words, to appease the mind, to coexist in this knotted world.' Sometimes, that's the best we can do.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel, I usually talk too much and too fast. Poetry has taken the place of my voice for the last few years. Makes others appreciate that they don't have to listen to me *s thanks M kelly, thank you for reading *s Dixie, I hope you have a nice visit with your brother. One of mine can stay 1000 miles away from me for the time being...  M Duncan "Sometimes, that's the best we can do.... " Yes..I have this small war going on inside of me and the larger one looms not far off this morning (after watching news) thank you M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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