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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-02-05 07:46 AM


It seems that lately I've been searching
for answers deep within my soul,
but it is not yet the time
for those answers to be told.

There is great sadness that is felt
wrapped up in this heart of mine
as I continue to hope for us
to both be able to heal with time.

I'm no longer sure of what to say
you already know all that's in my heart,
and each day spent without you
just tears my world a little more apart.

Each day I pray for the strength
to keep on getting through
and each day I pray    with love
that your heart will keep guiding you.

Feb 4-2003

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-02-05 08:02 AM


Sending hugs your way, GS... All will be well - hopefully sooner than later...
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-02-05 08:39 AM


It seems that lately I've been searching
for answers deep within my soul,
but it is not yet the time
for those answers to be told.

There is great sadness that is felt
wrapped up in this heart of mine
as I continue to hope for us
to both be able to heal with time.
====================================


mothyme thinks the real beauty of this gem of pen is its sincerety and its the emotional honesty of this heartfelt rhyme divine, that answers all of the questions.
heart-hugs Donna


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-02-05 08:48 AM


To keep another
in your thoughts
and prayers
when they have inflicted
pain
is the beginning of
forgiveness...
and tenders to others
the knowledge
of a warm,
and caring,
soul

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-02-05 04:21 PM


In order to heal..we must first forgive.
You are headed in the right direction.
Heart hugs to you sweetie.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2003-02-05 10:00 PM


Composed with gold ribbon...TD
Lisann
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6 posted 2003-02-05 10:05 PM


The light of the heart will always lead us home.........if we choose to follow it.  This poem has a bit of a sad content to it but it is very well done.
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-02-05 11:29 PM


Donna, sweet friend, you have put your heart
in this poem. Even though it's a sad poem, your heart is beautiful.......


With heart-hugs from
Ethel  

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-05 11:42 PM




(sigh) Oh Donna, this is lovely, sweet friend, I know this beauty will find your heartn always as He has a promise set for us all that needs no bold or italicized font! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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since 2003-01-25
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Florida USA
9 posted 2003-02-06 12:08 PM


Gentle Spirit, things will get better,i know  with this poem you are on you way of healing from your hurt
Elie
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since 2003-02-04
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New York, USA
10 posted 2003-02-06 12:30 PM


Time will only tell.
I loved it

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
11 posted 2003-02-06 01:12 AM


The mountains we climb seem so high at the time, but someday you'll find yourself on the backside looking up.  

Be well Gentle one~  


passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-02-06 02:55 AM


ache is deep here
Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2003-02-06 07:52 AM


Thanks and to everyone.
I'm just trying to get through the emotions,
words help....

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