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Warm Summer Breeze
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Warm Summer Breeze |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Warm Summer Breeze The warm summer breeze blows gently through his hair he stares out at the seas in silence and aware of his mortality seems reality has shown him...alone Watches a couple walk hand and hand across the beach dreams of future he hears them talk knows of oneness they'll strive...to reach Together they seem in total bliss love occupies their very being the voyeur in him stares as they kiss envelopes their passion he is seeing old fashioned loves passion without care he watches them there...alone In tune to the waves crashing they dance to the oceans song to him she's beautiful to her he's dashing to both each other they belong And now, after reminiscing in his mind reality snaps him from the past to find the warm summer breeze blowing gently through his hair as he stares out at the seas in silence and aware of his mortality, seems reality, has shown him through past remembrance... alone Copyright © - 2001 Dennis Hicks *Just a quick note about this write. There was no one else on the beach, as this was all in his mind as he looked out towards the ocean...indeed ...alone |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dennis, The images of the beach in solitary splendor are stunning. I like the circular nature of the poem as well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Stunning indeed and I agree, I loved the style of this poem Nice write  aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have done that too... |
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