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Broken Trust..............(2 senryus)
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Broken Trust..............(2 senryus) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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The pain is so bad when someone trusted that much made my trust crumble Especially when the reason for broken trust causes my CHILD pain [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 12:45 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
if you let it.. the broken trust can ruin a lifetime, it hurts so much. It certainly scars for life. Its so hard to ~learn to~ trust and love again. Painful and I hope you are doing ok. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GG, Yeah, I'm okay. Just trying to write a little something of the pain caused by someone years ago....way before I ever met my Gary. But, it did make it very hard to trust like that again. I'm so thankful that Gary is so patient with me...and has been patient with me for years. Thank you for replying...  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 01:04 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got it! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Pain expressed often blooms with beauty. Such as this. Eric |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed... Our children shouldn't suffer from the inconsiderations of their parents... Been there... It's not a nice feeling...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, this is good---keep pouring out the pains of the past so that their shadows don't cloud the days of your present. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel, I feel this.....hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Good strong write, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, my heart goes out to you and your daughter, I know how difficult it must be for her but I know when you and Gary are finally together she will see how loving and special he is and he will be so giving to her too just as I'm sure she will call him Daddy too! (wipes tears) I send angel hugs to both of you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, somehow, I knew you would understand......  . . Eric, thank you. You do have a way with words. . . Nan, so true. I'm sorry you've "been there" and had the bad felings.... . . Thank you all so much for your replies. I appreciate it very much..... With hugs from Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, thank you for your words of wisdom... . . Donna, thank you, sweet lady.. . . I appreciate both of you very much and pray that all is well with both of you. With hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 11:21 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, thank you, Sir. I really do appreciate you and your words of wisdom.. . . . Noah, I know that she will love Gary, too. He is such a sweet and compassionate person.. . . Thank you both very much. Hugs from Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
heart hugs for you  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Ethel, Gosh, can I ever relate to these words. My friend, I almost choked on them when I read them; wanting so much to make them my own. Sadly, my broken trust is many of the priests and hierarchy of the Catholic Church. It is good to get this all out ... Huggles, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the poem. Thank you.. . . Sea, thank you very much for the "heart hugs". I love those..... . . Martie, I'm so sorry that you ever had to experience this pain. Broken trust is so hard... Hugs to you, friend... . . With love and hugs to you all from Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm sorry you had to write this but glad you felt you could share it |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You write an honest heartfelt sob upon this page my friend. I see the blessings in your life today, such a change from the winters past. ThisDiamond |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, I understand how hard it is to trust someone. I lost my trust in everyone, when I was very young. And, it has been so hard for me to trust anyone. My husband was the first man I ever fully trusted. He really hurt me alot. Now, I find myself wondering, if I will ever be able to trust again. I am so sorry you had to go through this too. Big  my friend. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, yes i know it hurts for some you. im here for you.Rita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, it's only a beginning, friend. Thank you for your encouragement..... . . Oh yes, Kathleem. The past had a lot of heartaches in it, but now I have my Love..... . . Sue, once someone has been so hurt, it is hard to trust again. I'm very glad that I met the man in my life now. Thank you for understanding.... . . Heart hugs to you all Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Carol, I know that you are always there for me. You don't know how much I thank you for that, too. Love ya'll, Ethel |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ethel, poignant words here. A pity that trust is such an intangible commodity that you only know you have given it to someone when s/he betrays your trust |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Garysgirl, I enjoyed the read. Pain heals with times grace We can smile when a new day breaks Tomorrows bring hope For the child we feel Let nothing harm the children They are our future Take care and keep on writing!! Sincerely Rick |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kaile, you are so right. thank you for reading and replying. I really appreciate it.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Rick  thank you for your sweet reply. It was a poem within itself, and so true. I loved it. Again, thank you..... Hugs from Ethel |
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