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Mistletoe Angel
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STARDUST
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/10/01



Stardust
Fills your eyes
Cascades of heaven gush
Down your soft cheeks they slide

Stardust
Blankets me in the evening
Your warm breath and moans of love
Laves me as I hold you close, dreaming



Stardust
Frocks me when you are near
Lifting you and I up
Heavenbound from doubt and fear

Stardust
Complements from the cupids
Thank you for giving me true love
At lifes fountains we shall forever together sip...
Of love as golden as starlight...













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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1 posted 2003-02-05 11:33 PM


That sounds like me and Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-05 11:33 PM


This is just beautiful Noah. If I wasn't taken man I would run after you. LOL j/k Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2003-02-05 11:44 PM


You pick the perfect words.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-02-06 01:22 AM


Noah, these are just beautiful. I love them.
I told my friend that they're as prettier than Hallmark Cards...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-02-06 02:50 AM


well, mr. cupid better send some my way then...
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