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Open Poetry #24
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Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
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disbelief
0 posted 2003-02-04 09:10 PM

I can't help myself
                    - look what you've done.
I can't see myself
                  - as bright as the sun.

I feel the lacerations
                    - on the side of my face.
I forget the visions
                    - take me from this place.

[This message has been edited by Effigy (02-04-2003 09:22 PM).]
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*Star*
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since 2003-02-03
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Iowa
1 posted 2003-02-04 09:51 PM

*thinking*     I like your style
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-04 09:52 PM

Strong words but I like.

Cold hands means a warm heart
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
3 posted 2003-02-05 08:05 AM

This is really creative.
Thanks,
Eric
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-02-09 12:42 PM


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