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Open Poetry #24

"The Un-charted Course"

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2003-02-04 07:13 PM

To a far distant shore
let the future prevail,
that our dreams might become
a fresh wind for our sails.

Riding hope to new heights,
for the wake of our past,
though, was filled with great strides,
never was meant to last.

Ever on, stretch the seas,
reaching out to new realms.
Let our faith lend it's strength
to the hands at the helm.

Never wavering course,
seeking truth 'neath the veil
of the stars overhead,
let our lives tell this tale.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2003-02-04 11:22 PM

"Riding hope to new heights,
for the wake of our past,
though, was filled with great strides,
never was meant to last."

wow...just loved this

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-02-05 01:29 AM

Beautiful and wise. Enjoyed. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-02-05 01:47 AM

I'm picturing a big ocean and horizon and the ship out on it is making it through the times and .. its beautiful

I love it!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2003-02-05 02:31 AM

imagery is awesome!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2003-02-05 09:20 PM

Very beautiful poem, Doc!

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2003-02-06 01:16 PM

Enjoyed the ride Doc. Liked the images and the feel. Sail on!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-06 01:24 PM

Doc, this is beautiful. I love it....

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

8 posted 2003-03-07 07:18 PM

SEA,regards2you,GG, passing shadows,Denise, Drew,garysgirl.
Thank you all for replying. I am at best a bad, bad, boy for taking so long in acknowledging your efforts. Write as if the world was on fire and your seat was getting warm! Thanks again, my friends.
Doc

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