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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-02-08 11:04 AM


Before me, the crimson dawn in waking flight
of silent climb upon the morn. Where vision comes
from darkest night, into the day...again reborn.

Where whispers climb the tree side hills, as calls
echo the whip-o-wills.And leaves rustle the
dew to fall upon the wake, the climb of ball.

O but to feel the serene, the golden warmth
of spilling sheen.The rush of gleam within the
eyes squinting, the sparkle of gold in glinting.

I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing
warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on
earth’s first light....to fly and soar....
alone in flight


© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-02-08 11:12 AM


Barry, my friend

"I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing
warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on
earth’s first light....to fly and soar....
alone in flight"

and you warm my heart too!  


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-08 11:13 AM


Well, goodmorning, Barry  

It's good to see you here today. I've missed your
smiling face...
and your poetry and replies.....
Don't stay gone so long the next time....
.
.
.
With heart hugs from  
Ethel  
.
Oh, and as always, your poem is beautiful....

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-08 11:18 AM


Barry ~

You just keep getting better and better and better!...

May your heart be forever open to give and receive love

Valentine hugs,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-02-08 11:23 AM


One giant footstep for barry. Can't say how much you have improved.
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5 posted 2003-02-08 12:03 PM


you've been missed...of course, I've been busy and not around like I want to be...but I was wondering where you were
Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-02-08 01:36 PM


what a contrast , i feel completely crappy this morning and violently heaved the covers over head as the first rays cast into my room.
lovely write magnus

Margherita
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7 posted 2003-02-08 02:40 PM


Beautiful words to greet a new day, always soaring high ... awakened by dew's touch.
Margherita

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8 posted 2003-02-08 02:45 PM


"I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing
warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on
earth’s first light....to fly and soar....
alone in flight"


Amazing write m'friend...much enjoyed.
You have been missed..
Your 'sigh producing' poetry as been too.
Hope all is well..
~Hugs, Smiles & Sighs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-02-08 05:11 PM


To cast away the velvet of a night, and celebrate the dawning of daylight...

Have missed you here poet. Welcome to PIP!
Hope to read more of you. ThisDiamond

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10 posted 2003-02-08 05:16 PM




(smiles) I've been wondering too where you've been, dearest friend, I just love your wonderful impressionist-esque poems that shine with such lovely images of dragons and folklore and fawns and knights and so much more! (big hugggssssss) Again your talent dawns upon us, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2003-02-08 07:04 PM


enjoyed
Nightshade
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12 posted 2003-02-08 09:48 PM


Lovely dear Magnus. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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13 posted 2003-02-08 10:08 PM


O but to feel the serene, the golden warmth
of spilling sheen.The rush of gleam within the
eyes squinting, the sparkle of gold in glinting.

*swoon*  

Jolly good poem Barry~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-08-2003 10:09 PM).]

ctowen
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14 posted 2003-02-09 12:17 PM


As the Maestro steps upon the stage,
   the air is silent, the day awaits
      his magical touch to its song ...

             .... bravo, bravo ...
                      

gemjop
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15 posted 2003-02-12 02:00 PM


Barry......    wow.
into my library this is going, it gives me a special kind of feeling when i read it.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

icequeen
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16 posted 2003-03-07 11:09 PM


Fabulous as always! I have been gone a while, came back tonight to read "Magnus poems" and don't see you in Open 25... sooo here I am in the archives getting a fix!!
Hurry back!! LOL


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