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Dawning
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Dawning |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Before me, the crimson dawn in waking flight of silent climb upon the morn. Where vision comes from darkest night, into the day...again reborn. Where whispers climb the tree side hills, as calls echo the whip-o-wills.And leaves rustle the dew to fall upon the wake, the climb of ball. O but to feel the serene, the golden warmth of spilling sheen.The rush of gleam within the eyes squinting, the sparkle of gold in glinting. I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on earth’s first light....to fly and soar.... alone in flight |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry, my friend "I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on earth’s first light....to fly and soar.... alone in flight" and you warm my heart too!  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, goodmorning, Barry  It's good to see you here today. I've missed your smiling face... and your poetry and replies..... Don't stay gone so long the next time....  . . . With heart hugs from Ethel  . Oh, and as always, your poem is beautiful.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry ~ You just keep getting better and better and better!... May your heart be forever open to give and receive love Valentine hugs, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
One giant footstep for barry. Can't say how much you have improved. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you've been missed...of course, I've been busy and not around like I want to be...but I was wondering where you were |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
what a contrast , i feel completely crappy this morning and violently heaved the covers over head as the first rays cast into my room. lovely write magnus |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful words to greet a new day, always soaring high ... awakened by dew's touch. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I bask the break as would the flower, absorbing warmth and sunlit power. To lie and gaze on earth’s first light....to fly and soar.... alone in flight" Amazing write m'friend...much enjoyed. You have been missed.. Your 'sigh producing' poetry as been too. Hope all is well.. ~Hugs, Smiles & Sighs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To cast away the velvet of a night, and celebrate the dawning of daylight... Have missed you here poet. Welcome to PIP! Hope to read more of you. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I've been wondering too where you've been, dearest friend, I just love your wonderful impressionist-esque poems that shine with such lovely images of dragons and folklore and fawns and knights and so much more! (big hugggssssss) Again your talent dawns upon us, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely dear Magnus. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
O but to feel the serene, the golden warmth of spilling sheen.The rush of gleam within the eyes squinting, the sparkle of gold in glinting. *swoon* Jolly good poem Barry~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-08-2003 10:09 PM).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
As the Maestro steps upon the stage, the air is silent, the day awaits his magical touch to its song ... .... bravo, bravo ...  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Barry......  wow.into my library this is going, it gives me a special kind of feeling when i read it. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Fabulous as always! I have been gone a while, came back tonight to read "Magnus poems" and don't see you in Open 25... sooo here I am in the archives getting a fix!! Hurry back!! LOL |
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