Open Poetry #24 |
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Stillness of Sound |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
![]() The words..... I wished for them so many times wanted to hear you in earnest whisper throaty sexy with need I wanted them to touch.... to reach depths that went beyond merely romantic and put devastating to shame ......and in your silence your utter stillness of sound I’ve heard so much more than any words you could ever say |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to reach depths that went beyond merely romantic and put devastating to shame ============================= oooh...that is aching with sensual angst.. very cool write and pic... welcome to Poetry Land Souls Shadow.. so nice to have you here with us. ![]() I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Speaking volumes. Well done. Welcome to Passions. Look forward to reading you. ThisDiamond |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
This is absolutely fantastic, and to add a Dali artwork, you've earned a huge fan |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh my! wow, felt this one, deep. Amazing write! Welcome to the Blue Pages, certainly glad you came. Stay awhile! ![]() Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome To Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read much more of your poetry... ~Ethel...garysgirl~ "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggsssssssss) This is such a sad but powerful debut, sweet friend, I wish that all that could be said could actually be recited without preterite defuncts, you nail it on the dot here, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WOW! You will fit in very well! Welcome to Passions! I love what you've done here! More, more, more! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Souls Shadow with Stillness of Sound...even the introduction of you and your poem is poetic. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() Oh what a wonderful opening post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
Janet, thank you for the great welcome This Diamond, thank you Aenimal,that's excellent. I have enjoyed your poetry too GG, thanks for the amazing and the welcome Ethel, thank you Noah, wow...thank you Passing Shadows, thank you Sunshine, very cool, thank you Enchantress, neat welcome, thank you |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A very belated welcome. A Dali fan, no less. You do write well ~wranx |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Loved the way you wrote this poem... "Doubt thou the stars are fire |
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