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Some Things I NEED To Write About
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Some Things I NEED To Write About |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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I love to write about my Love the one I adore and love with all my heart The one God has sent to me from above About the starry nights we look upon from the beautiful white beaches in the soft velvet skies The beautiful sunsets and the sunrises of a beautiful morn Of our love that we truly believe to be forevermore Never ending, with us always together About our life of love, of joy and happiness To write of our love together makes me feel better ALWAYS But...... There are past hurts that I NEED to face up to...to write about Happenings from previous times that I wish came no longer to mind And don't UNTIL I read some poem or hear some song or see some movie THEN the hurts, disappointments DARK MEMORIES of yesteryear come to mind I NEED to write of those terrible things those dark memories of yesteryear so that the scars will heal never to be remembered again NEVER again to be remembered To be forgotten FOREVER [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 05:48 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a war of dualing emotion--nicely presented Ethel! :waving: enjoyed the read. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Ethel, often remembering the bad times make us appreciate the good times all the more. Nice work!  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Then please write them you know there are many who do the same, and most importantly those who would listen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, I believe that in all relationships to understand and sympathize with all ones heart for another is important, as I have so much darkness in my past and much mysteries twisting in my minds attic! (sigh) This is very sincerely heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, I do enjoy reading all your up-beat loving and romantic poetry, BUT if you have the need to express past hurts, pains and delusions...please do! I'll read and understand... Warming hugs, Linda |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
write away!  That is why we are here - to listen, to learn, to grow... BlueEyes |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is beauty in all things. And you reflect this so powerfuly with your words. Eric |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I love the conflict going on here, because it is so very real....where there is great love, there is also a need to purge oneself from the past. In our hearts, I think we do need that, to make room for the future. Oh, this was a wonderfully phrased write, and very, very human! Loved it!! A truly happy person is one who |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
good job |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Karen,  Yeah, it seems sometimes there is a war going on inside, between emotions. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks....  . . Hi Michael, Yeah, I think you're right. Because of my past experiences, I appreciate the way my Love treats me, even more. He is so sweet... . . Love and hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 06:44 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello . . Raph, I know that most people here would understand. It's just very hard to write about things that have been pushed way down inside. I'm going to start trying more, though. Thank you.... . . Noah, That's very important. One of the many things that I love about mine and Gary's relationship is that we have become to trust each other so much that we talk about anything and everything. We have told each other things that we have never felt confident enough to confide in anyone else about. We love each other unconditionally. Thank you,...... . . With hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 06:53 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Linda It's good to see you here. Friend, I know that you would understand whatever I might write about. It's just so much easier to write about the sweet, happy, loving ways of mine and Gary's love. Thank you for your friendship.... Ethel |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You've shared with all of us both your love and your conflicts. It takes great courage to show these emotions and I admire you (and your writing) greatly for it. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Blue Eyes, Thank you so much. I appreciate all of you so much . . . Eric, thank you very much. You always reply with kind words. I appreciate it. . . With hugs to you both, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 08:15 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sunny  Thank you very much. You really seem to understand. Probably because you are so in love, too. I really appreciate your reply. . . Andrea, I'm glad that you like the poem. Thank you. . . . "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 08:25 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Ken I thank you for your kind words. You are very nice. I really appreciate all of you here at PIP. I'm really glad that I found this place among you family of friends. Thank you... Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, alot of times those memories are hard to forget. And yes, it does help to write about them. Sometimes you have to write about them more than once to get to the point where there is no more pain. |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
I enjoyed both sides of it......unfortunately.....in order for us to see the beauty.....we must also see the "ugly" in order for us to feel the good...we must also experience bad. It is in the way in which we understand and interpret them......the way in which we choose to deal with them that makes all the difference. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... reflections of the Light and the Shadow, well contrasted in words. THANK YOU!! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
We all have more than one story. Keep writing... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sometimes, we need to get rid of it, shake that memory off....and writing helps I relate so nicely done |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Sue I knew that you would understand. I wish I could write about those bad experiences the way you do. Just when I think the bad memories are gone, they pop back up again. Thanks for replying to my poem... . . Hi Lisann I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. Yeah, sometimes I guess my way of dealing with things is to ignore them...which isn't good. Thanks for replying... . . With hugs from, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-04-2003 11:48 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cinnamongirl..... I like what you said... "the Light and the Shadow"....... sounds like a good title, doesn't it? Thank you for replying.... . . Duncan, Hi Yeah, you are right... Everyone, I guess, has more than one story. Thank you for replying to my poem... :. . With hugs from Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Julie Thank you. I'm really glad that you liked it. I appreciate you reading and replying. . . Hello Sea Yeah, I know. I sure do want to get rid of the bad memories and shake them completely off. I've got too many good memories in the process of being made now. I'm really glad that you liked the way I did the poem. Thank you very much... . . With hugs from Ethel |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Hi Ethel, you know i am one that pretty much lets people know where they stand with me but i can very much relate to what you are saying some things are hard enough to write about much less try to say and there are some things we just dont want to face no matter how long ago it has been.Remember i am here. love you! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Hi Ethel, you know i am one that pretty much lets people know where they stand with me but i can very much relate to what you are saying some things are hard enough to write about much less try to say and there are some things we just dont want to face no matter how long ago it has been.Remember i am here. love you! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Carol Yeah...I know that you know..... . . And...I know, too, that you're always there.. . . With love and hugs, Ethel Mae........ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know |
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