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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-04 03:51 AM


Soft Silky Flesh

I don't know why
her back felt so good
but I wanted to find out
as soon as I could.

With each press against
her soft silky flesh
eagerly we shared
tender moments
of caress.

And when her lips
begged for my kiss
I could not deny her
the use of my lips.

JamesLee
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2003

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-02-04 04:51 AM


James,


The last line made these lips smile.

Enjoyed this poem for the pure honesty in it.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-04 04:48 PM


Very pretty and sofly sensual.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-02-04 04:52 PM


Very nice James..
Good to see you writing about 'kisses' again.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-02-04 08:35 PM


James - soft is good, very good...

BC

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5 posted 2003-02-04 08:40 PM


James, I like this.
Made me think about how soft Gary's lips are...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

poohbear19
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6 posted 2003-02-04 08:57 PM


good poem and good job


andrea

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7 posted 2003-02-04 11:35 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, such romance shines from your giving warm heart that any women would dream to share! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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8 posted 2003-02-05 12:14 PM


James, i liked this. it is so nice
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-05 02:46 AM


wow
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10 posted 2003-02-05 02:55 AM


this reminded me of that scene in romeo and juliet where they are comparing kissing to sin and praying and he says to do like praying and hold still and then he kisses her.
But then maybe thats because I should be doing my English assignments right now.
I like this

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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