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Open Poetry #24
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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-05 04:46 AM


i want you
im lonely i confess
so neurotic,i worry too much
i wish i knew how u see me
afraid to ask,for it might frighten u away
dont leave me alone dear
i want u to stay,keep me warm
im really not so bad
once i met myself go
tell me what u want,all of it
invite me
i want u to make me feel
make me beg, give me a reason to hang on
dont lead me on
dont leave me hanging
been there,done that
i hope i always give u a reason to come back
dont be afraid
you have my attention
dont ever worry bout what im thinking
simple words for the way im feeling
i want you,if i can have u
let me know
i'll be so patient
i'll never make u worry
im not like them
i know how your feeling
im feeling it too



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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-02-05 12:39 PM


the pain just pours from this...*sending hugs*
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-05 12:40 PM


I feel the pain. I like the way you expressed it. great write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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