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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
tailor made life cut to fit with each experience repatterned for a suitable style a fashion statement of worn out dreams patched up to be a quilt of warmth stitched with designs to comfort me each square a choice of precious memory cold winter nights huddling this blanket around me my life my own designed to fit made by me |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked this verse especially~ a fashion statement of worn out dreams patched up to be a quilt of warmth stitched with designs to comfort me each square a choice of precious memory Sometimes it's all that's left, and all there is. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of one I wrote called Patchwork |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
"each square a choice of precious memory" Oh but if we could all stitch together the experiences and memories of our choices, I think it would make us a lot happier in life. Enjoyed this poem greatly! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
anne, I like your poetry as much as I like your prose. Excellent.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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