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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-02-04 02:18 AM

Scorched earth
and naked tree
no longer
bare fruit
Slung over shoulder
in Ahom bag
seeds of knowledge
Into the wilderness
for fertile lands
From nature
guided by nature
Anubis white
barks at my feet
As I hang
over chasm
precarious
one step forward
Oblivion
one step forward
Salvation
The beginning of ends
and end of beginnings
the pull
of consciousness....
Rebirth

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-04 02:36 AM

stunning! I am speechless...breathless...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-02-04 07:11 AM

everything,
nothing,
from the same place,
zenspeak........i like this, mucho

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-04 03:04 PM

one step forward
Oblivion
one step forward
Salvation
The beginning of ends
and end of beginnings
*********************
In circular fashion...just as in the basic structure of the natural world.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-02-04 03:08 PM

Stark. Beautiful.

You hammer out fine stuff, my friend.

I am going directly over to Members' Area and putting you on my favorites list.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-02-04 03:11 PM

excellent!

enjoyed

Maree

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-02-04 03:26 PM

smile.

Starting the journey, eh?

(mystic muse....mystic muse....HINT)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-02-04 04:21 PM

Breathe Dixie breathe, and smile as you've made me

Michelle knew you might and glad you did

Yes Kacy maybe we should listen more often to the lessons nature teaches

Ratleader I am honoured that you'd do so, many thanks

Thank you Maree nice to you see you again

Sister K beginning or ending? I can take a hint

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

8 posted 2003-02-04 04:38 PM

A very cool write. I really enjoy your style!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-02-04 04:41 PM

Much appreciated Brad, thank you

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-02-04 04:43 PM

...very well stated!!!--and in fine poetic fashion!

Warm hugs,
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-02-04 05:03 PM

Thank you Lind nice to see you, smiles

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

12 posted 2003-02-04 07:25 PM

nicely done Raph...
tight, concise, and strongly worded enough to drive out any fluff... good work here.. fine indeed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-02-04 07:45 PM

Thanks Cpat, learning to tighten them up more
has helped my writing

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2003-02-04 11:25 PM

"The beginning of ends
and end of beginnings
the pull
of consciousness....
Rebirth"

yes...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2003-02-05 03:53 PM

thanks susan, you know i just finally figured out how clever your handle is lol

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2003-02-05 11:55 PM

lol it's also my licence plate

kinda fun how it worked out, I happen to love the ocean....

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