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Dreaming You
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Dreaming You |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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DREAMING YOU I have to dream your arms around me your kisses... I have to dream your sleepy voice whispering I love you so... while the warmth of your body comforts me on a winter’s night I have to dream us going out holding each others hands I have to dream your eyes... sending me I love you’s making me feel safe as only you can do wherever we go I have to dream you close as close a dream can be to get me through the day until... until... I am in your arms again and I finally can live my dream in reality... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja LOL why not have it both ways, enjoyed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Beautiful dream...better reality. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nice surprise ending...I was totally going somewhere else while reading (guess not everything is about me LOL). Really enjoyed it! Susan |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful dream...nicely told. Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my goodness... you have said exactly what I feel when my Love and I are apart. Isn't it something how we all can have such similar feelings? Thank you for posting this. . .  . . . ~Ethel  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOpsy-daisy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Neeraja, one day you will be in his arms again for real.. and maybe the next time...it will be forever. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, I know this feeling of yearning ever so well, sweet friend, I have no girl now and I only try to imagine I may have someone of my own in the future and love in any way possible! (sigh) Sometimes I just feel love isn't for e, maybe I'll be proved wrong, but I know it will come to you and your love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pure and sweet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Seymour... both ways huh???  Duncan... you are so right!!! Susan... I am glad you enjoyed it! Ericc... thanks!! Garysgirl... we should start a club... Nancy... you always know how to cheer me up and keep my spirits high!  Noah... Love is for everyone... never forget that!!! Passing Shadows... thanks again... and thanks to you too James!!!  |
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