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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2003-02-02 09:23 AM

Without you
I feel like a drop of seawater
left in a shell on the beach
cut off from it’s source
waiting for the high tide
You are my ocean mijn lief…
my ocean of love
and I’ll wait for the high tide
to pick me up again
so we can dance our waves
in an endless rhythm
into
a future together…

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-02 09:25 AM

The tide does not remain out
of reach
forever...neither will
your own "mijn lief"...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-02 09:30 AM

Neeraja
A remarkable write, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-02 11:08 AM

outstanding!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2003-02-02 11:33 AM

interesting write..enjoyed

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

5 posted 2003-02-02 12:20 PM

Thanks for the sweet words! It is strange... I wasn't writing this as a poem... it was just a memory I had of him and I at the beach a few months ago. I always like the shells with those drops of seawater in it, they shine like diamants on the beach... so... my mind went back and suddenly the words came.
I just wanted to share... smile... I guess I felt lonely... those Sundays are the hardest...

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2003-02-02 12:23 PM

Wow... I just noticed that I am a senior now!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-02 05:07 PM

(smiles) Oh Neeraja, I too know that feeling ever so much, I too feel so lonely now especially without my Joanna anymore but I know with all my heart you will be together with your love and you will be together! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-02 05:11 PM

Neeraja, this is absolutely beautiful. I love this....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-02-02 08:54 PM

Neeraja - the shell on the beach weaves a tale of things what will be. I hope you have the best of what the shell is saying...

BC

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-02-03 01:23 AM

I wait for high tide too

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-02-04 01:22 AM

Neeraja~
This is an extremely well penned piece.
I truly enjoyed the read.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

12 posted 2003-02-04 02:58 AM

Neeraja~ Enjoyed, thanks for sharing.
May the tide & the moon work together to join you and your love forever...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

13 posted 2003-02-04 03:46 AM

It feels like a warm bath... all those sweet comments on this little poem of mine....

Noah, Garysgirl, Bill, Passing Shadows (I like your name) Vicky and Paul, thanks!!!

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