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rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-02-02 05:52 PM

I said I’d need a miracle
To turn it around
And you just can’t see
That it’s you
I want it to be

You are everything
And nothing that could be
But you just can’t see me
I’m so inferior
And so small

I said I’d need a miracle
To turn it around
And you still can’t see
That this
Is killing me

You are amazing
I can’t think of your face
Without wanting to smile
But you just won’t see me
I’m too small

I said I’d need a miracle
To turn it around
But you have your back turned
And without looking
You’ll never see

That you are the only one
That I want it to be.

small insignificant useless me

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-02-02 06:44 PM

Well done my friend...to bring to light the way we short ourselves, when we believe that someone else is greater, better or more a treasure to behold.
Will make us think, and choose wisely whom we grace with our love. ThisDiamond

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

2 posted 2003-02-02 09:47 PM

Very good, and yet very true for a lot of people. Thank you for sharing. I hope everything works out.

Andrea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-03 01:20 AM

I could really relate to this...thanks for sharing

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-02-04 01:18 AM

rm711~
You've expressed the emotion very well in this piece.
I could 'feel' your words as I read.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Barbara Trautman
Member

since 2002-10-23

Posts 90

5 posted 2003-02-04 01:36 AM

Why do we always want what seemingly can't (or, perhaps, shouldn't) want? Haven't most of us been there? Nice poem though. Barb

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-02-05 03:54 AM

All things are possible but after all is said and done and experienced I don't really want a woman that doesn't want me...that doesn't think I am special...a very important concept to consider...James

Dr Pepper Freak
Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 72
CA

7 posted 2003-02-05 07:25 AM

Ask for a miracle enough and Im sure you will get it in due time! Very touching piece!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

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